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Some people like to communicate by e-mail and voice mail. Other people like to communicate by telephone or face to face. Which type of communication do you prefer? and why? Be sure to include details and examples to support your opinion.

One day I was in a cafe,meeting two friends who I haven't seen for months. After we ordered our coffee, everyone took out the phone and staring at it,soon our table was in a silence .I started thinking of how we used to talk with each other when we were together  in the old days ,but now even we are setting together,all we do is take out our phone and checking the e-mails.Some people think that communicate with others by e-mail and voice mail is a good choice because of its convenience. But some people prefer communicate by telephone or face to face. I agree with the second one.

One day, I was in a cafe to meet two friends that I haven’t seem for months. After we ordered our cups of coffee, everyone took out their phone and starred at it. Our table was in a silence soon. I started to think when we used to talk with each other together in the old days but they just took their phones and checked their emails then. This is why some people want to communicate with others by email and voice mail for good choice because of convenience. But others prefer to talk each other by telephone or face to face. I agree with the second one.

Communicate with others by telephone or face to face is a way that have been used for a very long time.These two ways are more classic and useful.In the 30's-40's,communicating in telephone was very popular.Telephone was one of the best invention in the history.It solved the long distance communicating problem.When people have something to tell or talk about,they no longer have to go and find the other person,because they can communicate far away by the magical telephone.

Communicating with others by telephone or face to face is a fantastic way we have been using for quite a long time. This communication tool is more classic and useful. In the age of 30 to 40, to talk in telephone is dramatically popular. Telephone was one of the best inventions in the history. It solved the problem of long distance communication. When people are eager to tell something to others, they don’t have to go and find another people in person no longer. Because they could reach to contact people by such magical telephone.  

Talk with others face to face might be the most ordinary way of communicating.But also,it is the most practical way.You might have lots of meetings everyday,have you ever wondered why do people have meetings on work ,can't they just use the e-mail for convenience? The fact is,face to face communicating is more formal and serious,it shows your respect,and on a research report shows that face to face talking can be more persuasive.

Talking with others face to face might be the most ordinary way of communication which is also the most practical way. You might have lots of meetings everyday. But have you ever wondered why people have such meetings on work? Can’t they just use the emails for convenience talking? The thing is that communicating face to face is more formal and serious, which shows your respects and it is based on research report. And it is said that talking face to face can be greatly persuasive.    

Also communicate by e-mail and voice mail is very popular for the present day,but there is still some bad influence shows the negative parts of it.Using e-mail might be convenient,but for the growing technology,the internet is no longer safe and the information you saved on the internet might be stolen.What's more?If everybody use the e-mail and voice mail to communicate,we will live just like robots.Would you be delight if everyone plays voice mail while having the dinner?

Presently, to communicate by emails and voice mails are fairly popular. Unfortunately, there are some bad influences to show the negative effects of them. Using email might be bringing convenience, for the growing technology. The internet is not safe anymore and the information you put into storage might be stolen. What’s more, if everybody talks with each other by using email and voice mail, we will live like robots. Would you be delighted if everyone conducts voice mail while others have been taking dinner together with them?


Generally speaking,there is a good part of e-mail and voice mail,it can bring you convenience and fun.As for the telephone and face to face communicating,it is the most useful and mainly way that others can't replace.For me,I will always support the second one,because no matter what kind of way we use to communicate,we will still back to our classic way,because people will always need to have a talk on the phone or face to face.
Generally speaking, there are some merits to emails and voice mails, which could bring to people convenience and let them feel into entertainment. As for the telephone and talking face to face, it will become as the most efficient and mainly method for people to use and it cannot be replaced easily by something. But for me, I will always strongly hold the perspective that people will always need to have a talk on the phone or face to face when we still back to our traditional and classic way to contact people.   
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Secondary school students should be taught how to manage money because it is an important life skill.Do you agree or disagree?

Recent years increasing number of secondary school have established personal finance courses. The topic of whether secondary school students should be taught taught to manage their money has triggered heated discussion. Notions on this issue alter dramatically.

Recent years, increased numbers of secondary schools have established personal finance courses. The topic of whether secondary school students should be educated to administrate their money has triggered heated discussion. Notions on this issue alter dramatically, of course, I strongly hold the opinion that students on these ages are more likely to cope with their money.  

On the on hand, it is no doubt that secondary school students possess money management skills, which including familiarize to keep track of their spending as well as creating a sensible daily budget. Furthermore, the allocation of using their incomes from part-time jobs is supposed to be the most reasonable properly. Last but least,it is necessary to understand how to use commonly-used money management tools and methods in order to operating personal money management software more independent.

On one hand, it is no doubt that secondary school students possess money management skills, which includes to familiarize and keep track of their spending as well as create a sensible daily budget. Furthermore, the allocation of using their incomes from part-time jobs is supposed to be the most reasonable properly. Last but not least, it is necessary to understand how to use commonly-used money management tools and methods in order to operate personal money management software more independently.  

On the other hand, personal finance courses could teach secondary school students to stay financially organised and budget wisely, however, not all of them consider that responsibilities should be rewards with money. The more important point is that heavy burden may less likely be afforded by those secondary school students who attend school more earlier than any other peers. Thirdly, facing to severe hazards in establishing this kind of personal finance courses, schools  which do experiment in some developed counties.

On the other hand, economic courses for the individual could have to teach those students to spend financially organized and wisely negotiable. However, not all of them consider that heavy burden may be less likely afforded by those secondary school students who attend school earlier than any other peers. Thirdly, facing severe hazards in establishing this kind of individual economic course schools which provide and do experiment in such developed countries.        

Personally, I think that there are advantages to both sides. I attended secondary school but feel that I myself missed the personal finance course so that I can’t manage my money well until the college life. But hopefully times have changed, and whether students in Secondary schools should be taught how to manage their own money or not can have equal chances to each students themselves.

Even if I think that there are merits on both sides. And I don not feel self-controlled to manage money well during the college life, but times has changed. Whether students in the secondary schools should be assigned tasks of dealing with money equally for each one or not, I still state the perspective that to manage money is the fabulous idea for students to grow up.