环境保护谁来负责？

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母题：Environmental problem is too big for individual countries and individual people to address. In other words, we have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? (040228, 040515, 110507)

提示：不管题目怎么出，永远记得国际合作、企业、政府、个人，都可以为环境保护做出自己的努力。所以，你要准备的内容，就是以上四个方面可以做的事情。

注意对比修改前的作文和修改后的作文，修改前的作文有些跑题。

作文：

In the present age, environment is increased involvement in people’s lives,. However, whether the only way to protect our environment is at an international level has produced sparked controversy into two sides. Personally, I believe the contribution from individual countries and individual people far outweigh the contribution from international level.

In the present age, environment problem is increased in involvement of people’s lives. Whether the only way to protect our environment is at an international level has produced sparked controversy into two sides. Personally, I believe that the contribution of individual countries and individual people far outweigh the contribution from international level.

Admittedly, it is true that international communication and cooperation has been playing an increasingly important role in environment protection, more and more International environmental agreement is signed, but i wonder whether the international cooperation is the only way to solve environmental problem ? Never !

Admittedly, it is true that international communication and cooperation have been playing an increasingly important role in environment protection. More and more international environmental agreement is signed, but I wonder whether the international cooperation is the only way to solve environmental problem? Never!

Moreover, I am more in favor of the idea that there is many way to protect our environment. Firstly, the governments can enact relevant laws to punish the behaviors of polluting the environment, and place strict regulations on highly polluted industries. At the same time, more efforts should be strengthen to publicize the importance of environmental issues, and then promote citizens’ awareness to take actions. Secondly, countries should pay attention to technological innovations so as to conserve energy and raw materials, and reduce the exhaust fumes that are harmful to our health and environment. Finally, it is essential for all of us to be environmentally-friendly. Such as we can get rid of the littering habit, reuse shopping bags, recycle cans and bottles, choose walking or bicycling rather than electric vehicle. That is to say, environmental problem is not too big for us to address, if we want to.

Moreover, I am more in favor of the idea that there are many ways to protect our environment. Firstly, the governments of individuals can enact relevant laws to punish the behaviors of polluting the environment, and place strict regulations on highly harmfully output industries. At the same time, more efforts should be strengthened to publicize the importance of environmental issues, and then promote citizens’ awareness to let them practice into actions. Secondly, countries should pay attention to technological innovations so as to conserve energies and raw materials. It may be trying to reduce the exhausted fumes that are harmful to our health and environment. Finally, it is essential for all of us to be environmental protectors. For instance, we are able to get rid of the waste littering habits, shopping bags re-use, cans and bottles recycling; choosing to walk or bicycling rather than oil vehicle use. That is to say, environmental problem is not too big for us to address if we really want to overcome it.   

Overall, I convinced that environmental problem requires a concerted effort by individual person, individual nations and international cooperation. Specifically, all of us should be active participants in environmental protection to have a nice future.

Overall, I convince that environmental problem requires concerted efforts by people and nations internationally. But I am still preferred to hold the perspective that individual countries and individual people can strongly participate into the environment issues and they will be more active than those international officials to deal with problem of environment sometimes.